Here Are 15 Reasons Why
Your Story Isn’t Engaging Donors

It’s frustrating.

You put your heart into every word.

Yet the response to your stories are lukewarm. It can feel like your efforts are in vain. But don’t worry -- you’re not alone, and there are clear reasons why your stories aren't engaging donors. 

Below are 15 of the most common problems that hold stories back. In "Quick Fixes for Fundraising Stories," you'll learn how to fix them -- and you'll get examples to help you overcome these obstacles. These story problems are usually a simple fix. Often, it’s just a sentence or two that needs tweaking. 

Here are 15 reasons why your story might not be connecting with donors:

1. Your Story Isn't Engaging
2. Your Story Doesn't Inspire Action
3. Your Story Sounds Monotone 
4. Your Story Lacks a Clear Message
5. Your Story Doesn't Have a Strong Opening
6. Your Story Feels Disconnected
7. Your Story Feels Too Long
8. Your Story Lacks Visual Elements
9. Your Story Isn't Relatable
10. Your Story Feels Generic
11. Your Story Lacks Conflict
12. Your Story Feels Rushed
13. Your Story Doesn't Evoke a Strong Ending
14. Your Story Is Hard to Follow
15. Your Story Feels Impersonal

If you're writing a fundraising letter, talking with a major donor, using social media, or speaking at an event, getting the solutions to these story problems will help make you a more engaging storyteller.

The solutions to these 15 problems are
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"Quick Fixes for Fundraising Stories" is packed with simple, actionable solutions to these 15 problems. No fluff, no jargon, just straight-to-the-point fixes that make your stories connect, engage, and inspire.

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